titliyan...............

yaadon ki rang birangi titliyan bohat door nikal gai...........aise jaise k sab aik doosre se athkailian kar rhi hon..
aik be ikhtyar si muskarahat us k labon pe machal gai........
magar aik bacha in titlyon ko pakarne k lie betaab ho utha..jo us ki dastaras se bohat door ja chuki thi...............
phir aik ajnabi haath ne aik titli ko pakar lia aur bache ko thamate hue usse chamkaarne laga.........

jab bache ne titli chori to wo berang ho chuki thi..magar bacha apne rangeen haath daikh k khushi se khilkhalane laga.............

achanak us ki aankh khul gai..magar us k maathe par soch ki gehri shiknain thi....
k aik dam se khilkhalate hue bache ka tamtamata hua chehra us ki aankho k saamne aa gya.......
aur us k honton par aik narm o dabeez si muskarahat bikhair gya.......
be ihktyari may hi us larki ne apna muwazna us titli se karna chaha.....

to usse khud may aur us titli may koi farq nazar nhi aaya..........
jo apna rang de k bhi doosro ki khushi may khush ho........

is k saath hi us larki ki zaat pe chai hui khudtars shaam ki dhund..........aik roshan aur shafaf subha k fakhar may badal gai........................

Originally Posted by hoorain

yaadon ki rang birangi titliyan bohat door nikal gai...........aise jaise k sab aik doosre se athkailian kar rhi hon..
aik be ikhtyar si muskarahat us k labon pe machal gai........
magar aik bacha in titlyon ko pakarne k lie betaab ho utha..jo us ki dastaras se bohat door ja chuki thi...............
phir aik ajnabi haath ne aik titli ko pakar lia aur bache ko thamate hue usse chamkaarne laga.........

jab bache ne titli chori to wo berang ho chuki thi..magar bacha apne rangeen haath daikh k khushi se khilkhalane laga.............

achanak us ki aankh khul gai..magar us k maathe par soch ki gehri shiknain thi....
k aik dam se khilkhalate hue bache ka tamtamata hua chehra us ki aankho k saamne aa gya.......
aur us k honton par aik narm o dabeez si muskarahat bikhair gya.......
be ihktyari may hi us larki ne apna muwazna us titli se karna chaha.....
to usse khud may aur us titli may koi farq nazar nhi aaya..........
jo apna rang de k bhi doosro ki khushi may khush ho........

is k saath hi us larki ki zaat pe chai hui khudtars shaam ki dhund..........aik roshan aur shafaf subha k fakhar may badal gai........................

very hard work sis.......



Butterfly....

wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww....wat a deep thinking...
ITS REALLY NICEEEEEEEEEEEE....
thanks for sharing sis....

Kuch tehrirain Perhny k liye hoti hain,Kuch samjny k liye,Kuch Dil main utarny k liye Or kuch mehsoos Krny k liye Hoti Hain...Ap ki is tehreer ko prhny k nhi Mehsoos krny ki zorort hy....
Or bht hi deep thinking hy......

this is pretty interesting .. i like it..

but the question is.. did you write it by ur self ? i mean is this your work?
and if not, then it should be moved to somewhere else.

thank you

ahaaan no thanx

true said...

arre don kia ho gya hay maine khud likha hay isi lie idhar post kia
kisi ko yaqeen q nhi aata

Originally Posted by hoorain

arre don kia ho gya hay maine khud likha hay isi lie idhar post kia
kisi ko yaqeen q nhi aata

kon yaqeen nahi krta hai hoorain..........?

nice sharing my sister superb sharing

thanxxxxxx bhaya

Sorry dear.. i was just making sure great work tho

THANX DON BRO